08-25-2005, 10:20 PM
Yes, the preamble is horrible but I couldn't think of anything to say...I had been doing homework for 3 hours before writing this so I wasn't thinking very clearly 
How about this?
UPDATED PREAMBLE:
SEEING THAT some companies label their products incorrectly, or may misuse words like ?fresh? and ?organic?, and also seeing that there is a rising number of people on diets that need to be able to know what is in what they are eating, this proposal imposes the following:
How about this?
UPDATED PREAMBLE:
SEEING THAT some companies label their products incorrectly, or may misuse words like ?fresh? and ?organic?, and also seeing that there is a rising number of people on diets that need to be able to know what is in what they are eating, this proposal imposes the following: