09-08-2023, 09:56 PM
They found her facedown in the fountain.
What a place to die, eh?
We were on the scene in less than a half an hour. But like usual, it wasn’t fast enough. Somebody had already dragged her, lifeless, to the ground. People here never respected crime scenes. It was like everyone felt they personally had to feel like the savior of a woman who had already died. I personally always believed in leaving the dead well alone. They already had to go through dying, why put them through your phoney savior tears?
‘Course I say that and then immediately turn around and watch a dozen people get autopsied every month. In a way I’ve always wondered if the autopsy helped them find their own peace. They could feel us cutting them open and they knew we wouldn’t let their death be unavenged. Then again, the moment I write those words on paper, they sound like a buncha hokey bullshit.
In any case, the drowned girl’s body awaited us. It wasn’t a pleasant sight, slash marks deep and jagged across her torso. Almost looked like she’d been tortured at first glance, the way the knife had ripped instead of cut. We did our best to gather clues at the scene for the poor girl but it was hard enough just to keep the crowds away. God I hate this place.
Murder here is a spectacle. Within a week of the girl’s death, her pictures had infiltrated every corner of the internet. The sight of her body, splayed out in the fountain, red tendrils slowly seeping into the water around her. There was a certain twisted, dark serenity to it, but that didn’t mean the girl deserved to be turned into some kind of pariah. “The Drowned Angel” they called her. The funny thing was, they didn’t even know her. We didn’t even know her. Nobody knew who she was, not even the coroner. But nevertheless she was an angel, descended from above some said. How can you label someone an angel? Isn’t that a pressure they don’t deserve?
That’s a whole different rant though. What was more important was that the case was going nowhere. We’d cut open every inch of her, searched every identifying feature of her in the database, and we’d come up emptier than a birdbath in the summer. She was a ghost more than an angel. And goddamnit it frustrated me. I always hated cases I couldn’t solve. Still do. And shit this one was… blank. The file spanned three pages and two of them were a coronary file that basically said we had no idea what we were even looking for. The scene had been trampled and ruined of anything useful. Even the slash marks were essentially unidentifiable, just some kind of thick, dull blade. You know how many thick, dull blades there are in the world?
And still her popularity grew in the eyes of the people. There was a closed session of the church 11 days after her death. 167 people shedding blood in honor of The Drowned Angel. A shrine was enacted to her at the fountain. People began to herald her as a sign of the end times. Some even said she carried a message from the gods — that we were somehow hiding something that great. It was exhausting, irritating, and downright invasive. This country’s obsession with transparency meant privacy was impossible. A woman couldn’t be left to die without a million people shoving her into their own agendas and narratives.
It’s never bothered me when people vilify me. I’m an investigator, a detective, the man at the center of every major case this city sees. I’ve made mistakes, I’ve fucked up, I’ve missed clues, and I’ve made countless press conferences just to say that despite my best efforts, I’m completely fucking useless. At some point, the public needs someone to blame, and I’ve always been happy to be that person.
What does bother me is taking advantage of the dead. Taking advantage of me. Taking advantage of this nation and our obsessive compulsion toward the worst religious craziness. It’s so easy to brainwash people in a place where brainwashing is the norm.
What a place to die, eh?
We were on the scene in less than a half an hour. But like usual, it wasn’t fast enough. Somebody had already dragged her, lifeless, to the ground. People here never respected crime scenes. It was like everyone felt they personally had to feel like the savior of a woman who had already died. I personally always believed in leaving the dead well alone. They already had to go through dying, why put them through your phoney savior tears?
‘Course I say that and then immediately turn around and watch a dozen people get autopsied every month. In a way I’ve always wondered if the autopsy helped them find their own peace. They could feel us cutting them open and they knew we wouldn’t let their death be unavenged. Then again, the moment I write those words on paper, they sound like a buncha hokey bullshit.
In any case, the drowned girl’s body awaited us. It wasn’t a pleasant sight, slash marks deep and jagged across her torso. Almost looked like she’d been tortured at first glance, the way the knife had ripped instead of cut. We did our best to gather clues at the scene for the poor girl but it was hard enough just to keep the crowds away. God I hate this place.
Murder here is a spectacle. Within a week of the girl’s death, her pictures had infiltrated every corner of the internet. The sight of her body, splayed out in the fountain, red tendrils slowly seeping into the water around her. There was a certain twisted, dark serenity to it, but that didn’t mean the girl deserved to be turned into some kind of pariah. “The Drowned Angel” they called her. The funny thing was, they didn’t even know her. We didn’t even know her. Nobody knew who she was, not even the coroner. But nevertheless she was an angel, descended from above some said. How can you label someone an angel? Isn’t that a pressure they don’t deserve?
That’s a whole different rant though. What was more important was that the case was going nowhere. We’d cut open every inch of her, searched every identifying feature of her in the database, and we’d come up emptier than a birdbath in the summer. She was a ghost more than an angel. And goddamnit it frustrated me. I always hated cases I couldn’t solve. Still do. And shit this one was… blank. The file spanned three pages and two of them were a coronary file that basically said we had no idea what we were even looking for. The scene had been trampled and ruined of anything useful. Even the slash marks were essentially unidentifiable, just some kind of thick, dull blade. You know how many thick, dull blades there are in the world?
And still her popularity grew in the eyes of the people. There was a closed session of the church 11 days after her death. 167 people shedding blood in honor of The Drowned Angel. A shrine was enacted to her at the fountain. People began to herald her as a sign of the end times. Some even said she carried a message from the gods — that we were somehow hiding something that great. It was exhausting, irritating, and downright invasive. This country’s obsession with transparency meant privacy was impossible. A woman couldn’t be left to die without a million people shoving her into their own agendas and narratives.
It’s never bothered me when people vilify me. I’m an investigator, a detective, the man at the center of every major case this city sees. I’ve made mistakes, I’ve fucked up, I’ve missed clues, and I’ve made countless press conferences just to say that despite my best efforts, I’m completely fucking useless. At some point, the public needs someone to blame, and I’ve always been happy to be that person.
What does bother me is taking advantage of the dead. Taking advantage of me. Taking advantage of this nation and our obsessive compulsion toward the worst religious craziness. It’s so easy to brainwash people in a place where brainwashing is the norm.

