02-28-2006, 07:06 AM
Clause 2 B) there is reasonable doubt that the individual or group will not receive a fair trial or punishment proportionate to the crime;[/quote]
Uh oh. Double negative. What you want is:
Quote: B) there is reason for the requested nation to believe that the individual or group will not receive a fair trial or punishment proportionate to the crime;[/quote]
I would also define "requesting nation" and "requesting nation" at the beginning and use more distinct words for them, otherwise the proposal gets hard to follow.
Uh oh. Double negative. What you want is:
Quote: B) there is reason for the requested nation to believe that the individual or group will not receive a fair trial or punishment proportionate to the crime;[/quote]
I would also define "requesting nation" and "requesting nation" at the beginning and use more distinct words for them, otherwise the proposal gets hard to follow.