10-12-2005, 10:13 AM
MikitivityOct 12 2005, 03:38 AM I'm sorry I've been inactive ... long days at work, make for a very tired set of eyes at night. :/
I have a minor suggestion:
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-A- SHOCKED by the amount of children worldwide who do not have basic access to a computer[/quote]
-A- CONCERNED by the number of children who do not have basic access to a computer
Basically I think this should be toned down a bit, as education at this stage of a human's life isn't more important than nutrition. Also I removed "worldwide", as it is kinda implied anyways.
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thanks a lot for your suggestion, it's softer indeed
i will propose it to the author, i'm pretty sure he will agre with you
I have a minor suggestion:
Quote:
-A- SHOCKED by the amount of children worldwide who do not have basic access to a computer[/quote]
-A- CONCERNED by the number of children who do not have basic access to a computer
Basically I think this should be toned down a bit, as education at this stage of a human's life isn't more important than nutrition. Also I removed "worldwide", as it is kinda implied anyways.
[/quote]thanks a lot for your suggestion, it's softer indeed
i will propose it to the author, i'm pretty sure he will agre with you