09-25-2005, 12:43 PM
By writing about drugs, you should really use the Recreational Drugs category, because this resolution de-facto legalizes them.
I'd add a pre-amble, where you can make clear why you're writing this resolution. There you can sum up some earlier resolutions and explain why this resolutions adds something to them. Then you can continue with the articles you've written now.
Personally, I'm in favour of the standard UN format (ACKNOWLEDGING earlier resolutions, etc etc, The UN hereby RECOGNIZES the universal right to be free, AFFIRMS the right to incarcerate, but EXEMPTS from that right offences involving possession etc,).
That makes a clear distinction to why you're writing this, and what the resolution actually does.
Oh, and as for freedom to do with your body what you want, the Sex Industry Workers Act used that right as well by allowing prostitution (because it's not up to the government what you do with your body).
It's a difficult issue though, because many nations object to forced legalization of what they consider morally wrong.
I hope these comments help you improve your resolution. It's a good start you have though!
I'd add a pre-amble, where you can make clear why you're writing this resolution. There you can sum up some earlier resolutions and explain why this resolutions adds something to them. Then you can continue with the articles you've written now.
Personally, I'm in favour of the standard UN format (ACKNOWLEDGING earlier resolutions, etc etc, The UN hereby RECOGNIZES the universal right to be free, AFFIRMS the right to incarcerate, but EXEMPTS from that right offences involving possession etc,).
That makes a clear distinction to why you're writing this, and what the resolution actually does.
Oh, and as for freedom to do with your body what you want, the Sex Industry Workers Act used that right as well by allowing prostitution (because it's not up to the government what you do with your body).
It's a difficult issue though, because many nations object to forced legalization of what they consider morally wrong.
I hope these comments help you improve your resolution. It's a good start you have though!