06-08-2020, 07:38 AM
Let the record reflect that Eiria’s proposal, The Judicial Foundation Act, was edited about 36 hours ago. I am responding to that version of the document.
I am pleased to report that, to the best of my knowledge, your proposal does not violate any preexisting IDUSA bylaw. In other words, your concept now has my stamp of approval. The proposal’s underlying foundation is solid.
In terms of wording, it could still use a little work. You should definitely check your punctuation again. Additionally, your tenses jump around a lot. Try to keep it all consistent throughout the entire draft.
Best of luck to you.
I am pleased to report that, to the best of my knowledge, your proposal does not violate any preexisting IDUSA bylaw. In other words, your concept now has my stamp of approval. The proposal’s underlying foundation is solid.
In terms of wording, it could still use a little work. You should definitely check your punctuation again. Additionally, your tenses jump around a lot. Try to keep it all consistent throughout the entire draft.
Best of luck to you.