12-10-2019, 08:46 PM
Some quick thoughts _
1. As far as ‘Category’ is concerned, previous measures on animal welfare have indeed gone under ‘Moral Decency’: Although most if not all of those were before ‘Regulation’ was also available for potential use, I think that M.D. is still the best bet…
2. For the opening line of clause 2, adding the words “in member nations” immediately after “Decrees the following provisions, to ensure the wellbeing of livestock” would make it clearer that you’re not trying to a have a direct effect on non-W.A. nations as well as on the W.A.’s members.
3. If there are enough characters available, do you think that it might be a good idea to follow clauses 2 & 3 with one that forbids member nations importing meat & other animal-derived products from non-member nations unless the production in those countries was also up to these standards?
4. I think that giving your new WA agency responsibility for overseeing things directly, rather than just for checking that member nations have their agencies for this purpose and that those are functioning properly, is a bit excessive.
1. As far as ‘Category’ is concerned, previous measures on animal welfare have indeed gone under ‘Moral Decency’: Although most if not all of those were before ‘Regulation’ was also available for potential use, I think that M.D. is still the best bet…
2. For the opening line of clause 2, adding the words “in member nations” immediately after “Decrees the following provisions, to ensure the wellbeing of livestock” would make it clearer that you’re not trying to a have a direct effect on non-W.A. nations as well as on the W.A.’s members.
3. If there are enough characters available, do you think that it might be a good idea to follow clauses 2 & 3 with one that forbids member nations importing meat & other animal-derived products from non-member nations unless the production in those countries was also up to these standards?
4. I think that giving your new WA agency responsibility for overseeing things directly, rather than just for checking that member nations have their agencies for this purpose and that those are functioning properly, is a bit excessive.