07-09-2005, 11:38 PM
Riparian:
Perhaps I can also change this one, which currently reads:
"1. APPROVES of the continued research into the various water supply and hydroelectric power generation reservoir mitigation measures including the design and operation of temperature control devices, construction of fish passage structures (such as fish ladders), use of pulse flows during migration and other critical periods, and maintenance and restoration of riparian organic material sources (such as wetland habitats);"
To something like:
"1. APPROVES of continued research into the various water supply and hydroelectric power generation reservoir mitigation measures including the design and operation of temperature control devices, construction of fish passage structures (such as fish ladders), use of pulse flows during migration and other critical periods, and maintenance and restoration of wetlands (which are important nutrient sources);"
That removes rpiarian and organic material.
I also deleted a "the" at the beginning of that clause.
Another way to shorten this one, might be to say:
"1. APPROVES of continued research into various large-scale reservoir mitigation measures ..."
Thoughts?
Perhaps I can also change this one, which currently reads:
"1. APPROVES of the continued research into the various water supply and hydroelectric power generation reservoir mitigation measures including the design and operation of temperature control devices, construction of fish passage structures (such as fish ladders), use of pulse flows during migration and other critical periods, and maintenance and restoration of riparian organic material sources (such as wetland habitats);"
To something like:
"1. APPROVES of continued research into the various water supply and hydroelectric power generation reservoir mitigation measures including the design and operation of temperature control devices, construction of fish passage structures (such as fish ladders), use of pulse flows during migration and other critical periods, and maintenance and restoration of wetlands (which are important nutrient sources);"
That removes rpiarian and organic material.
I also deleted a "the" at the beginning of that clause.
Another way to shorten this one, might be to say:
"1. APPROVES of continued research into various large-scale reservoir mitigation measures ..."
Thoughts?